Slice of Life #17 Prepositional not entirely

This is a slice that was incomplete and titled “Prepositional” before it was lost.

Originally I collected groups of prepositional phrases that captured my day and now the slice that was has become something different.

There we were

In the rain on the mountainside

Watching jump

After jump

Observing flight

With skis onto snow

A ridiculously long day full

of empty talk

that made us hungry

for substance and relief

from the elements.

We drove home

through fog and snow

pleased

with our boy and his success

ready to lose ourselves

in our rectangular worlds

of choice.

Here’s another option:

Snow, rain, chill: in the

Mountainside, hill: on the

Day, meeting, awards ceremony: through the

Youth hostel, end: at the

Fog

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